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Old 08-30-2008   #1
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Default Poem i wrote!

I am kat
I wonder what goes on in her head
I hear her cries
I see the sadness in her eyes
I want to help
I hope what i do helps
I am kat

I am kat
I pretend not to notice
I feel sad
I touch her heart
I worry when the phone goes dead
I cry when she cries
I am kat

I am kat
I understnad how she feels
I say im here to help
I dream of a perfect life
I try to make sense
I am not an Angel
I am Kat

If your wondering who this is about its about my mother this was a language arts project!
i HAVE ANOTHER ONE BUT ITS PERONALL SO YEAH
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Old 08-30-2008   #2
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Default Re: Poem i wrote!

What should I comment?
It's okay, I guess. The grammar is 4/5 though.
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Old 08-30-2008   #3
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Aw that's sweet.
I like it very nice
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Old 08-30-2008   #4
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WHAT DO U MEAN dENIERU WHAT WRONG WITH MY SPELLING?
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Old 08-30-2008   #5
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Default Re: Poem i wrote!

Originally Posted by katylyn
WHAT DO U MEAN dENIERU WHAT WRONG WITH MY SPELLING?
Originally Posted by katylyn
I am kat
I hope what i do helps
I am kat
I am kat
I am kat
I am kat
I understnad how she feels
I say im here to help
I try to make sense
I am not an Angel
All these sentences have misspelled words. u.u
Your name should be capitalized.
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Old 08-30-2008   #6
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Den? The only thing I see mispelled is understand other than that it doesn't really matter if her name is capitalized or not :/
I mean if you were have to grade it because you're a teacher than yeah but hello online it don't really matter [well to me anyway]
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Old 08-30-2008   #7
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yEAH ... THX NENESTAR .....it doesnt matter i worked on this and i didnt write it just to have someone critisize my spelling or judge the peom because of my spelling
i somtimes mess up on my typing not a big deal
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Originally Posted by nenestar
The only thing I see mispelled is understand other than that it doesn't really matter if her name is capitalized or not :/
I mean if you were have to grade it because you're a teacher than yeah but hello online it don't really matter [well to me anyway]
To me it matters. I care about capitalization. I don't mind if you don't. It's my opinion. I just don't like the fact that people don't capitalize their Is.

Originally Posted by katylyn
.....it doesnt matter i worked on this and i didnt write it just to have someone critisize my spelling or judge the peom because of my spelling
i somtimes mess up on my typing not a big deal
Counting the typos in your post I quoted. 5 misspellings.
It was just my opinion. You don't have to care about it.
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That poem is so touching and sweet! You describe life like I describe it! I guess thats cos we're both Saggitarians. ^.^ Great job!
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Originally Posted by Denieru
To me it matters. I care about capitalization. I don't mind if you don't. It's my opinion. I just don't like the fact that people don't capitalize their Is.
:/ some people dont capitalize their I. I didn't before but I got into a habit of it when I had to write a personal narritive and stuff
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