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Old 07-31-2010   #1
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Well, Normally I'd post this on K-com, as I had about 10 people waiting for an update, so I'm just going to post the new chapters here until it back! This is the arts thread, and creative writing is an art! Anyone and everyone is welcome to read and comment, but i'd like to advise you all there is a LOT of gore.

Chapter one--

It was probably the stench of blood that first attracted them to the countless corpses laying within the old house. That, or the countless bodies buried in the yard, along with the scattered dismembered body parts throughout the forest. Days had passed since the old man had visited to deposit more bodies, possibly even a week, and the elves had no intentions of waiting until he returned to kill him. They were hungry, and refused to wait any longer for the old coot.

With a practised stealth the elves glided though the forest, landing on branches deep within the foliage of the trees, keeping them selves hidden, yet making no sounds from impacting the leaves, it simply looked and sounded like a summer breeze was sweeping through the forest.

Landing on the doorstep with a dulled thud, Rorick looked at his surroundings. It was a dark forest, with a single two story home in the centre of a large clearing. There was a small path leading up to the house through the woods, and a rusted metal gate, formerly used to keep people out, but Rorick could look at it and tell it could no longer hold out a mouse.

Without even looking, Rorick motioned to the trees, causing three other tall thin figures to appear out of the forest, two females, and a smaller male. It was obvious to anyone who looked that Rorick was the alpha male of his clan. He was the one who lead all the fights, he was the one who went into things first, he was the one who put the needs of the others before himself.

“Rorick, hurry up, we are all starving here! I could eat vegetables at this point.” A tall female with long black hair was staring at Rorick and tapping her foot silently. Her face was twisted with impatience, but her eyes showed care and love for the elvan leader in front of her... Mellas brother.

Without even acknowledging that she had spoken, Rorick pushed through the door, causing it to fall right off the hinges. With a sigh, Rorick simply moved the door aside and started to stare at the sight before him.

The house, was filled with bodies. Bloodied decomposing corpses lined the floor, stacked in the corners, surrounded the table...

“So the old coot was into butchery was he?” Mella was staring at the table with a bemused grin on her face.

“Honestly Mella! Your antics can wait until after the feeding!” Rorick was looking at her with a cheeky grin. “Though....of course, you could always butcher and then eat the meat...”

Mella wasted no time in excepting her brothers proposition, instantly skipping cheerfully across the room and slamming the nearest dead body onto the table causing the victims already broken leg to push its way through the flesh, and even the clothes.... Though that had hardly finished happening before Mella was wielding a large meat cleaver, heaving it at the woman chest, instantly severing her right bosom from her cold body.

Rorick stopped to watch for a few seconds before Ashkrin and Reepa went and chose a spot to feed. The two done everything together. Mates. Every elf Rorick had ever met had a mate, even he did. But his mate...

“Rorick! Eat. Now.” Mella was glaring over at him while blood dripped from her chin, actually her entire body was covered in blood..

Rorick nodded, slipping over to the nearest corner and tearing into the nearest body, ripping though the victims spine like it wasn’t even there just to get to the flesh beneath. Roricks entire body roared in satisfaction when the first handful of flesh reached his mouth, the icy blood running through his fingers, the meat slipping down his throat into his stomach

It was probably around twenty minutes before any of the elves showed signs of ending their frenzy, Mella was resorting to sorting out body parts, she had began going around and ripping the tongues out of the bodies, and depositing them in a skull. While Ashkrin and Reepa were lounging atop of a rather large pile of corpses, feeding each other eye balls that they had saved from their share of the victims. Those two never ate the heads... Said the didn’t like the way brains tasted.

“Awe! They’re so cute!” Mella was sat next to Rorick as they watched the young mates. “Reminds me of You and....”

“Mella! I though we agreed we wouldn’t talk about him?! It makes me miss him more...

“Alright, alright, I’m sorry Rorick, don’t rip my head off!”Mella had started playing with the hair belonging to the body of a young girl. “She is so pretty... Looks kind of like Sunas....” Mella proceeded to clench her fist as she closed her eyes, trying to block out the unwelcomed memories.

“Mella..... Mella calm down...” Rorick placed a calming hand on his sisters back, rubbing small circles to calm her, though it didn’t work. Mella squeezed her eyes shut and started grinding her teeth. In a fit or rage, Mella took a large portion of the pretty blonde girls hair and ripped it straight out of her head, and threw it against the wall with a head splitting yell, running right past he brother, she stormed into a hallway that was on the side of the room, which was fallowed by a large slam, and the sound of wood splinters hitting the floor.

“We should definitely let her calm down until morning...” The two mates had stated together while curling up in the nest of bodies they had just made. The two made a cute couple... blood soaked, yet always so cuddly...
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Chapter two--

Rorick shook his head as he got out of bed trying to shake the sleep off. Last night was the only night in a long time he had been able to sleep. It was probably because he finally had some food in him and his body was allowing him to rest peacefully. The house was essentially silent, all the other elves, tucked away asleep. Mella had came out some time last night, she was now lying next to Rorick. Silently rising out of the nest he had made for him and his sister last
minute.

It was a rather dark morning, clouds had crowded themselves into the sky, and rain was currently enjoying a chance to free fall upon the forest. Puddles were littering the yard, reflecting the grey sky back up, as if daring it to continue drowning it. Without a hesitation Rorick stepped out into the rain, walking out to the middle of the overgrown lawn, letting the rain wash over his body.
Rorick stayed out for a while, his eyes closed as the rain washed the evidence of last nights feeding from him. Slightly washing out the bloodstains from his white button up shirt, while also causing his messy hair to plaster itself over his face.

“Rorick...” Mella had somehow snuck up on him, and was now standing next to him in an equal degree of wetness. “You know.. We’re going to see them again.... And when we do, you can be happy again...” Rorick knew Mella was telling the truth, but it still hurt to be away from Bastin.

The rain continued to pour down around them as the two stood still looking blankly at the horizon, both of them holding tight to a pendant around their neck. The two elves suddenly turned, hearing something approaching from the path coming up to the gate. “You wait on the left, I’ll wait on the right. Stay out of site until I give the signal. It’s likely the old coot coming back.” Mella gave a silent nod and made a jump into the trees, while Rorick slipped around on the outskirts of the clearing, then perching in a tree looking oddly cat-like, as an family of six hiked their way up through the woods.

Rorick shot Mella a glance and she nodded at the silent command. They were to first take out their alpha. A human male with a large bag strapped to his back. Then the teenage male, the woman, and finally the children a quick death. A quick death was unusual for elves, though for children, Rorick had demanded his clan make an exception.

Once they were close, Rorick sent 3 rapid blinks at Mella who gave a curt nod in understanding that this was the signal to attack. After three slower blinks, each a second long, they both shot from the trees, Rorick aiming for the mans legs and breaking them with one well aimed kick, while breaking both the mans arms with a flick of his own. Bone had shot out of the mans forearm and Rorick grinned, perhaps he was being too rough? No, certainly not! Mella had already disabled the teenager in a similar fashion and moved on to the children, tearing their throats out with a single swipe, causing their small forms to drop into a pool of fresh blood that was forming around them. Rorick took this chance to restrain the woman, (who he assumed to be the mother of the children) and make her watch the horrors being laid upon the three small figures, just before he took her head and twisted savagely, causing her neck to snap, and her head to come completely off.

“Shame...” Mella muttered looking at the body slumped at Roricks feet, blood gushing from her decapitated neck, adding to the pool of her childrens blood. “She would have made such a good breeder for the Chamber.” Rorick gave a noncommental grunt and began to rip through the mans supplies where they stood, slipping into fresh clothing he had found. Motioning for Mella to do the same with the adult females bag. By the time she had finished dressing, rorick was tying some rope he had found in the bag around the ankles of their victims, to take them back to their new den. He was thankful for the rain, this ment the mud was slick and they’d be much easier to drag.

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The two siblings had returned to the cabin in time to see Reepa and Ashkrin weaving rope just below the ceiling, almost sewing the ends into the wall with human rib bones, producing a makeshift net. It was there that they would place the bodies to drain of blood and other fluids, it also served as a place to store them before they could be eaten. Understanding what was happening, Mella giggled and skipped over to the table, grasping a knife and stabbing a few holes in the bodies before passing them without so much as an order, to Rorick, who placed them on the net, letting the blood flow from their bodies and splatter onto the floor. This was a practice the clan was well acquainted to, as it was the official proclaiming of a new Den for the clan.

The procedure had lasted a few hours before they had to stop, they had ran our of space to suspend the bodies. Three of the four bedrooms were completely used, each having four layers of net and body suspended in the room, with a large broken hole in the middle of the floor so most of the blood could drain out.

“This is good, there is plenty of food remaining for the colony. Father and the other Monarchs will be most pleased.” Rorick was washing blood and other unknown things from his face as he spoke, because like his mother use to say, even though he was a man eating monster, didn’t mean he had to be dirty while he done it. Roricks mother... He missed her, she had been killed by his father for disobeying a direct order to kill their newborn daughter, Mella. All his father had ever cared about was staying in power, and as tradition dictates, and man that gave birth to a woman was unfit to be King.

His father had lost his position as monarch, Mella had survived, and his mother was dead. His mother never did care much for him, that was likely why he saw it as a fair trade, along with the fact he was now next in line to be king. He and Bastin. Monarchs of the elvan race. It was a fate so tempting in fact, that Rorick couldn’t help but smile.

It was only the smell of a fresh kill that caught his attention, in the sitting room, the three other elves were eating, much slower than the last time, having fed just yesterday. Rorick noticed, that lying on the floor was the body of the grown man, and the smallest child, a female.
Rorick smiled at his clans silent respect for him and shuffled over next to Mella, tossing the young girls body over to Mella, who had only the teenage boy. With a bloody smile of thanks, Mella dug back into her meal, her burrowing into the boys abdomen, her claws and teeth tearing through the once tight and smooth skin of the boys belly.

Rorick wasted no time tearing into the man, ripping his arms that were broken at the elbows from the body, and devouring the flesh from them before throwing the bones into a small closet attached to the room. The others fallowing suit, quickly throwing their discarded bones into the closet. The clan sat in silence, eating to their fill until somewhere near noon.

“Oh, Rorick, by the way,” Ashkrin was speaking now, using a shirt from one os his victims to wipe his mouth. “The other imperials will be getting here this evening around seven. They sent a message, when you and Mella were out, the imperial guard will also be accompanying them. Mella shot Rorick a happy smile, and all Rorick could do was smile back. In seven hours.... he would get to see his mate

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