01-31-2010
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Kupikan
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Qwara/Shropshire
Posts: 832
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Curious
I can't be bothered to explain how it happened, or why I'm writing it exactly. So in simple terms, I got set some homework in English Language and I quite liked it so I'm planning to carry it on into a novel/short story/whatever...
You can find it here and I'd like it if you could read maybe the first part that I've included and tell me what you think? Mainly what I need to improve because I'm fully aware I'm not that good a writer. >_> ps. I'm planning on adding more to it each day, & no that isn't the first chapter there. It's the start of the first chapter hence 01., and the next will be 01. cont. or something. n_n ---------- Post added at 05:31 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:12 PM ---------- If I hadn't have posted this thread then I'd still be on 666 posts, ohhhhhh. x_x |
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02-01-2010
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Jr. Kupi
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Under the stairs in a basement of a house half a block down the road from Jerrry's Bait Shop
Posts: 287
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666 rupees ftw.
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